Friday, August 14, 2009

She Was Standing There

First Day

SHE WAS STANDING THERE.She looked at him and smiled.He wanted to say hi ,much more than just hi .But couldnt even manage a smile.


Next Day

SHE WAS STANDING THERE talking to her friends.He wanted to talk to her. But she did not know him how could he go and talk to her?He thought. how could he say hi?What will the people around her think about him?And she moved away.

Next Month

HE was standing in a queue to buy a movie ticket.He saw her ,SHE WAS STANDING THERE. She came to him asked him if he could get her tickets.He was the happiest person in the world he couldnot believe it, how could the only girl in this world he wished to talk could come to him and ask only him.Thereby in all this over excitement he forgot to say yes.And she walked away.

Final Year

It was raining ,well dressed ready for a presentation he could see her SHE WAS STANDING THERE .Standing under his umberella he thought it was now or never.He made a move but it was too late by the time he reached her the rain stopped.DAMN !!!!!!!!he thought.

FEW YEARS LATER

He parked his car outside an airport and as he came out he saw her SHE WAS STANDING THERE.He couldnt believe his eyes. How lucky i am !!!!! he thought He moved towards her but she wasnt looking at him she was looking at someone else.She came running and hugged that guy and the world just stopped infront of him.Shocked he couldnt believe his eyes how could that happen,tears came down his eyes before he could stop them.She looked at him then towards her fingure ,a shinning new engagement ring .She smiled and happily left leaving him crying behind. ALAS!!!!All these years SHE WAS STANDING THERE right infront of him.

17 comments:

  1. I am becoming a fan of your writing. Either you are just too good or this is a real experience.

    Just amazing. Work lil bit on ending.

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  2. Good one..fiction or non fiction?

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  3. its just a fiction bhai i m too young to experience all dis

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  4. oh dear great work!!!! keep up your good work..

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  5. nice.. i wished it to continue more :P

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  6. nice one yaar!! we must have to take a step forward breaking the shackles to have a life we wished

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  7. really good....it requires a deeep thought to understand the situation...continue writin ... this sud hv sm other ending....extend if u can...

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  8. I am short of words....
    Just can say that it was INCREDIBLE...
    Awesome Scripting of thoughts.... :)

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  9. It is awesome especially scene at movie theater.Expressed feelings nicely.keep writing

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  10. nice short story ,i was absorbed in that while reading it . u have expressed the scenes eloquently .gud keep it up ..i hope will get some thing new on ur blog very soon.

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  11. the guy really waited way too long ! :) the article is short, crisp and if i am not mistaken a common story for many, yet it has been beautifully put in words :)

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  12. Agree with all of you,Harsh has a talent for writing short stories. Which books inspire you Harsh ?

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  13. Nice one Harsh !!! true story ,,, I guess :P :P
    how many times has it happened to you... but still, nice scripting of thoughts :P :P

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  14. @all:it feels good to see the enthusiasm from you, but as I havew mentioned it is just a fiction.

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  15. "final year" para was abolutely hilarious.... good one . :)

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