Thursday, July 9, 2009

THE LOSER'S LURGY

He was smiling,like he always does.Afterall being THE SCHOOL CHAMPION in chess is not just a thing.It was just another game,he knew he was going to win,it was a perfect trap he thought
as he moved his king out of the minister's way,two more steps and he would be sitting in canteen and telling girls about his recent exploit.wondering about the fututre he satrted making his move , just as he made his move , he saw a spark cross his opponents eyes.Unfortunately for him He had missed his opponents pawn and put his king in the harms way.but it was already too late ,his world had already crashed in front of his eyes.He the champion was the creator of his own destruction.
By the end 0f the day he had lost 3 more games.Heartbroken he went to lib hidden behind bookshelves he thought how things change with just one mistake, yesterday he was a predator in search of a prey now he was just another guy.
Hoping for a solution to all his problems he kept thinking about the days proceedings late into the night.

TO BE CONTD...........

5 comments:

  1. Just one or two formatting errors otherwise it is really good

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  2. I really wanted to appreciate u ur writing skill is very good..........
    THE STORY REALLY MADE ME VERY EMOTIONAL...............

    PLZ KEEP UP UR ART................

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  3. THANKS alot amis just keep reading and hopefully appreciate my writing

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  4. nice... smtimes i often feel to be in same situation...like now...

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  5. We have a very nice proverb linking 'malpua' and a situation like this .. :P

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